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  • dctyper
    V.I.P. Member
    • Jun 2008
    • 2539

    #1

    my new business

    hey guys, me and the wife have set up our own company. we provide fuel cards for businesses and self employed people. thought id get it out in the open so if anyone is either of the above mentioned and wants to save money, check my site out.

    its completely free and works out pretty good savings

    wish us luck and feedback from you guys about the site would be great

    Home - Fuel Cards, Fuel Card UK, Shell, Esso, Texaco, Petrol & Diesel Fuel Card Account for Business

    regards

    dave
    Wavefield Ds 55cm at 13E 19E and 28E receiving everything out there on 2 dm800hd

    previous life dm800hd and 500c on cable screw you nag3


  • Meat-Head
    V.I.P. Member
    • Oct 2009
    • 32000

    #2
    1) No offense or anything, but it looks like one of them 'fake -spam' sites
    needs some 'stripping out'

    2) WORSE THING
    You don't have a link to Digital-Kaos on your homepage.

    3) Good luck

    4) Can i order 5 gallons of parrafin please.

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    • dctyper
      V.I.P. Member
      • Jun 2008
      • 2539

      #3
      what do you mean, stripping out?
      Wavefield Ds 55cm at 13E 19E and 28E receiving everything out there on 2 dm800hd

      previous life dm800hd and 500c on cable screw you nag3


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      • Meat-Head
        V.I.P. Member
        • Oct 2009
        • 32000

        #4
        Originally posted by dctyper
        what do you mean, stripping out?
        JUST SOME RANDOM WEBSITE
        Landscape and garden expert

        just it looks real, yours looks 'fake' no offense
        like this goooooooogle.co.uk

        This looks ideal, as there none of them dodgy looking sideward popups
        and things being shown in $$$
        Tracy Barlow - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

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        • dell_xps
          V.I.P. Member
          • Dec 2008
          • 2558

          #5
          No offence m8 but diesel is spelt wrong in your website, and this sentence doesn't make sense,

          Do you use petrol or deisel? Whatever your a needs.we can succeed in saving you time effort and money

          Just thought I would point that out m8.

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          • Meat-Head
            V.I.P. Member
            • Oct 2009
            • 32000

            #6
            Originally posted by dell_xps
            N
            Do you use petrol or deisel? Whatever your a needs.we can succeed in saving you time effort and money

            .

            well spotted, properbly for italian readers!

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            • dell_xps
              V.I.P. Member
              • Dec 2008
              • 2558

              #7
              Originally posted by Meat-Head
              well spotted, properbly for italian readers!
              properbly....probably..yer a belter Meathead !!!

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              • thered
                V.I.P. Member
                • Aug 2008
                • 4915

                #8
                Originally posted by dctyper
                hey guys, me and the wife have set up our own company. we provide fuel cards for businesses and self employed people. thought id get it out in the open so if anyone is either of the above mentioned and wants to save money, check my site out.

                its completely free and works out pretty good savings

                wish us luck and feedback from you guys about the site would be great

                Home - Fuel Cards, Fuel Card UK, Shell, Esso, Texaco, Petrol & Diesel Fuel Card Account for Business

                regards

                dave
                good luck with it m8 its not much good to me tho i only stick about ?20 in a week

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                • dctyper
                  V.I.P. Member
                  • Jun 2008
                  • 2539

                  #9
                  thanks guys, didnt spot these myself. as for the widgets in $ i think its an easy fix, i wanted real info on the site and not adverts, so i dont want it like the 1st meathead. right back to work
                  Wavefield Ds 55cm at 13E 19E and 28E receiving everything out there on 2 dm800hd

                  previous life dm800hd and 500c on cable screw you nag3


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                  • dell_xps
                    V.I.P. Member
                    • Dec 2008
                    • 2558

                    #10
                    We are a dynamic company providing to all types of businesses. Are you a taxi driver or a national haulage company? Are you a charity or public service? Do you use petrol or diesel? Whatever your needs, we can succeed in saving you time, effort and money.

                    Our dedicated team, who have in depth specialist knowledge of different industries and organisations have the skills to provide you with the right card for your needs.

                    Before each ? I'd leave a space then a comma m8,

                    We are a dynamic company providing to all types of businesses. Are you a taxi driver or a national haulage company ?, are you a charity or public service ?, do you use petrol or diesel ?, whatever your needs, we can succeed in saving you time, effort and money.

                    Our dedicated team, who have in depth specialist knowledge of different industries and organisations have the skills to provide you with the right card for your needs.

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                    All our cards include a free online fuel card account management system

                    Customised to YOUR business need. Save time, save money with peace of mind
                    I'd have full stops at the end of these sentences also m8, and have needs instead of need.

                    All our cards include a free online fuel card account management system.

                    Customised to YOUR business needs, save time and save money get peace of mind.

                    Just my 2 bobs worth m8, all the best.

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                    • patkins
                      V.I.P. Member
                      • Oct 2009
                      • 3662

                      #11
                      Hi dctyper, I remember a short time ago you mentioned that you were thinking of starting up this venture and then, as now, I wish you the very best of luck.
                      I wouldn`t be an expert on web sites but yours looks pleasing enough to the eye.
                      Best of luck.

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                      • pLaYa.5
                        Newbie
                        • Apr 2010
                        • 15

                        #12
                        Good Luck Mate! Sounds Like A Good Venture! Keep Us Updated

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                        • nara
                          DK Veteran
                          • May 2008
                          • 2586

                          #13
                          Best of luck with the new venture. A new start-up can be both exciting and stressful.

                          You've received some good advice from members on how to improve the website, but TBPH it still looks a bit amateur. A lot of the spacing is clumsy and "The Home of discount Fuel" subheading doesn't inspire confidence. The lack of a capital letter for "discount" is poor.

                          It would be worth your while to shell out a few quid and get a professional to tidy things up for you.
                          He who laughs last probably didn't get the joke.

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                          • Vixen
                            DK Veteran
                            • Mar 2008
                            • 91

                            #14
                            Hi Dave good luck and best wishes to you and your wife in your new business.I think its a great idea.Will pass your website on to family friends and business associates. Once again best wishes.
                            Last edited by Vixen; 4 August, 2010, 12:09.

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