my new business

[dctyper]

hey guys, me and the wife have set up our own company. we provide fuel cards for businesses and self employed people. thought id get it out in the open so if anyone is either of the above mentioned and wants to save money, check my site out.

its completely free and works out pretty good savings

wish us luck and feedback from you guys about the site would be great

Home - Fuel Cards, Fuel Card UK, Shell, Esso, Texaco, Petrol & Diesel Fuel Card Account for Business

regards

dave

[Meat-Head]

1) No offense or anything, but it looks like one of them 'fake -spam' sites
needs some 'stripping out'

2) WORSE THING
You don't have a link to Digital-Kaos on your homepage.

3) Good luck

4) Can i order 5 gallons of parrafin please.

[dctyper]

what do you mean, stripping out?

[Meat-Head]

what do you mean, stripping out?

JUST SOME RANDOM WEBSITE
Landscape and garden expert

just it looks real, yours looks 'fake' no offense
like this goooooooogle.co.uk

This looks ideal, as there none of them dodgy looking sideward popups
and things being shown in $$$
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[dell_xps]

No offence m8 but diesel is spelt wrong in your website, and this sentence doesn't make sense,

Do you use petrol or deisel? Whatever your a needs.we can succeed in saving you time effort and money

Just thought I would point that out m8.

[Meat-Head]

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Do you use petrol or deisel? Whatever your a needs.we can succeed in saving you time effort and money

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well spotted, properbly for italian readers!

[dell_xps]

well spotted, properbly for italian readers!

properbly....probably..yer a belter Meathead !!!

[thered]

hey guys, me and the wife have set up our own company. we provide fuel cards for businesses and self employed people. thought id get it out in the open so if anyone is either of the above mentioned and wants to save money, check my site out.

its completely free and works out pretty good savings

wish us luck and feedback from you guys about the site would be great

Home - Fuel Cards, Fuel Card UK, Shell, Esso, Texaco, Petrol & Diesel Fuel Card Account for Business

regards

dave

good luck with it m8 its not much good to me tho i only stick about ?20 in a week

[dctyper]

thanks guys, didnt spot these myself. as for the widgets in $ i think its an easy fix, i wanted real info on the site and not adverts, so i dont want it like the 1st meathead. right back to work

[dell_xps]

We are a dynamic company providing to all types of businesses. Are you a taxi driver or a national haulage company? Are you a charity or public service? Do you use petrol or diesel? Whatever your needs, we can succeed in saving you time, effort and money.

Our dedicated team, who have in depth specialist knowledge of different industries and organisations have the skills to provide you with the right card for your needs.

Before each ? I'd leave a space then a comma m8,

We are a dynamic company providing to all types of businesses. Are you a taxi driver or a national haulage company ?, are you a charity or public service ?, do you use petrol or diesel ?, whatever your needs, we can succeed in saving you time, effort and money.

Our dedicated team, who have in depth specialist knowledge of different industries and organisations have the skills to provide you with the right card for your needs.

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All our cards include a free online fuel card account management system

Customised to YOUR business need. Save time, save money with peace of mind
I'd have full stops at the end of these sentences also m8, and have needs instead of need.

All our cards include a free online fuel card account management system.

Customised to YOUR business needs, save time and save money get peace of mind.

Just my 2 bobs worth m8, all the best.

[patkins]

Hi dctyper, I remember a short time ago you mentioned that you were thinking of starting up this venture and then, as now, I wish you the very best of luck.
I wouldn`t be an expert on web sites but yours looks pleasing enough to the eye.
Best of luck.

[pLaYa.5]

Good Luck Mate! Sounds Like A Good Venture! Keep Us Updated

[nara]

Best of luck with the new venture. A new start-up can be both exciting and stressful.

You've received some good advice from members on how to improve the website, but TBPH it still looks a bit amateur. A lot of the spacing is clumsy and "The Home of discount Fuel" subheading doesn't inspire confidence. The lack of a capital letter for "discount" is poor.

It would be worth your while to shell out a few quid and get a professional to tidy things up for you.

[Vixen]

Hi Dave good luck and best wishes to you and your wife in your new business.I think its a great idea.Will pass your website on to family friends and business associates. Once again best wishes.